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Do you think listening to sad music when you\'re feeling down actually helps?

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When I feel sad, to listening sad music is bad. Because when I listening to sad music,i feel more depressed.

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Hi there again, Jun!
Thanks for doing your homework.
Are you preparing for school already? I've noticed that you put your class on hold. Well, don't stop practicing English for your improvement.
Take care!
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When I feel sad, to listening sad music is bad. Because when I listening to sad music,i feel more depressed.
>>> When I feel sad, listening to sad music is not good for me because it makes me feel more depressed.
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