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1.At first. meet him so mean to me new he is nice.
2.At first. she didn't like in usa.now she loves it because she family with together.
3.At first. I'm marriage wes tough .it is still tough.
4. Everything is difficults at first. But it will be practice continues getting better.
5.It is hard to wake up early in the morning at first.

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Hello, Michelle!
Great job with your homework. You did great in creating different sentences. Just take note of minor corrections that can make your sentences easier to understand.
- T. Caitlyn 
1.At first. meet him so mean to me new he is nice.
>> At first, when I met him, he was mean to me. But now, he is nice.
2.At first. she didn't like in usa.now she loves it because she family with together.
>> At first, she didn't like living in the USA. Now she loves it because she is together with her family.
3.At first. I'm marriage wes tough .it is still tough.
>> At first, my marriage was tough, and it is still tough now.
4. Everything is difficults at first. But it will be practice continues getting better.
>> Everything is difficult at first, but with continuous practice, it gets better.
5.It is hard to wake up early in the morning at first.
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