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Q : If you were to buy an older iPhone today, which model would you choose and why?

A : Actually, I don`t know much about the iPhone. So, it`s very hard to answer. (P)
Since i haven`t used it, i don`t know about the models of iPhone.
However, i have used samsung galaxy, so i will answer the question by changing the iPhone to the Galaxy. (R)
I want to buy a Galaxy10 because it was my first phone and i loved the color of it. (E)
So, as i don`t know the models of iPhone, i want to buy a Galaxy10. I really liked it. (P)

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Hello Eddy,

I really like how you handled this question! Even though you¡¯re not familiar with iPhones, you found a creative way to answer by relating it to something you do know, Samsung Galaxy. That¡¯s a great way to keep the conversation going instead of getting stuck.

You also made your response personal and meaningful by mentioning your first phone and why you liked it. Adding personal experiences makes your answers more interesting and engaging. I can tell that you really liked your Galaxy10!

Keep practicing, and you¡¯ll continue to improve. You did a great job thinking outside the box on this one! Keep up the good work!

~Teacher Cathy

 

Actually, I don`t know much about the iPhone.

>>CORRECT

OR>>Actually, I'm not very familiar with the iPhone.

So, it`s very hard to answer.

>>CORRECT

OR>>So, it's quite difficult to answer.

Since i haven`t used it, i don`t know about the models of iPhone.

>>Since I haven¡¯t used it, I don¡¯t know about the models of the iPhone.

However, i have used samsung galaxy, so i will answer the question by changing the iPhone to the Galaxy.

>>However, I have used a Samsung Galaxy, so I will answer the question by changing "iPhone" to "Galaxy."

I want to buy a Galaxy10 because it was my first phone and i loved the color of it.

>>I want to buy a Galaxy 10 because it was my first phone, and I loved its color.

So, as i don`t know the models of iPhone, i want to buy a Galaxy10. I really liked it.

>>So, since I don¡¯t know the iPhone models, I want to buy a Galaxy 10. I really liked it.

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