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What is a perfect weekend for you?

작성자: 이*윤
2025-02-22 607

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Well, a weekend with a lot of holidays? HAHA, I'm joking.
My thoughts on the perfect weekend seem to change quite often.
Sometimes I thought it was the perfect weekend to meet my friends and enjoy ing funny places, eat delicious food, and talk for a long time.
On another day, I thought it was the perfect weekend to eat delicious food with my family, visit a good places, or visit a mart normally.
Then, on other days, I think it's the perfect weekend to take a day off without going anywhere or doing anything, but then I think it's the perfect weekend or a well-behaved weekend to do something or move around busily, like cleaning up or going to buy something I need on the weekend.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi! 

Thank you for submitting your homework. 
It was nice to know what a perfect weekend is for you. 
Even though they change everytime, I wish that you will always have a perfect one. ^^

~ Teacher Gina


Well, a weekend with a lot of holidays? HAHA, I'm joking.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: Well, a weekend with a lot of holidays? HAHA, just kidding.

My thoughts on the perfect weekend seem to change quite often.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: My idea of the perfect weekend seems to change quite often.

Sometimes I thought it was the perfect weekend to meet my friends and enjoy ing funny places, eat delicious food, and talk for a long time.
>> Sometimes, I think that a perfect weejend is meeting with my friends and enjoying in fun places, eating delicious food, and talking for a long time.

On another day, I thought it was the perfect weekend to eat delicious food with my family, visit a good places, or visit a mart normally.
>> Other times, I think it is eating delicious food with my family, visiting good places or a mart normally. 

Then, on other days, I think it's the perfect weekend to take a day off without going anywhere or doing anything, but then I think it's the perfect weekend or a well-behaved weekend to do something or move around busily, like cleaning up or going to buy something I need on the weekend.
>> On some weekends, I prefer a completely relaxing day at home, doing absolutely nothing. Other weekends, however, I find it satisfying to be busy, perhaps cleaning or running errands.



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