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How do you adjust your routine when unexpected things happen?

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I don't like my routine to be interrupted by unexpected things.
However, if I have to adjust my routine, I do.
To do that, I usually check the importance of my routine in advance on a weekly basis.
It is applied when I need to adjust my routine by checking the importance in advance, such as what I should not miss every day, what I should do 4 times a week, and what I should do 3 times a week.
Even if the unexpected thing is not work, it's also the case when routine adjustments are needed, such as when I absolutely need to take a break.

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Hi David! Your response is well-structured and demonstrates clear reasoning. You have effectively communicated how you manage your routine and adapt to unexpected situations. Your grammar is generally strong, with only minor adjustments needed for clarity and fluency. Keep up the great work!


~ T. Lia


I don't like my routine to be interrupted by unexpected things.
>> CORRECT


However, if I have to adjust my routine, I do.
>> CORRECT


To do that, I usually check the importance of my routine in advance on a weekly basis.
>> CORRECT


t is applied when I need to adjust my routine by checking the importance in advance, such as what I should not miss every day, what I should do 4 times a week, and what I should do 3 times a week.
>> This applies when I need to adjust my routine by checking its importance in advance, such as identifying what I should not miss every day, what I should do four times a week, and what I should do three times a week.


Even if the unexpected thing is not work, it's also the case when routine adjustments are needed, such as when I absolutely need to take a break.
>> Even if the unexpected situation is not work-related, routine adjustments may still be necessary, such as when I absolutely need to take a break.


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