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What makes a restaurant standout for you?

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I think there are many reasons why the restaurant standout.
The name of the restaurant can be luxurious, pretty, or funny, it can standout because of the good mood, or it can be because the interior or the appearance of the restaurant is good.
However, there are three main reasons why restaurants standout in my standards.
first, it's because of the signs or promotional materials in the restaurant.
In Korea, signs and promoting stores and restaurants are put up everywhere, and people pay attention to them because they standout.
Second, because I liked the interior of the restaurant, the appearance was good, or the mood was good.
Personally, I value interior design or atmosphere, but if these is an eye-catching interior, it seems to be more eye-catching than anywhere else.
Third, it is a crowded place.
When there are a lot of people in the restaurant, I wonder for reason. Why is that restaurant crowded? As I think about it, I enter the restaurant. This may be one marketing strategy.

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Hello! 

Thank you for sharing your answer with me.
It was nice to know the factors you mentioned in relation to why a restaurant stands out. 
Take care, and have a good night. ^^

~ Teacher Gina



I think there are many reasons why the restaurant standout.
>> I think there are many reasons why the restaurant stands out. 

The name of the restaurant can be luxurious, pretty, or funny, it can standout because of the good mood, or it can be because the interior or the appearance of the restaurant is good.
>> The name of the restaurant can be luxurious, pretty, or funny. It can stand out because of its good mood, or good interior or appearance.

However, there are three main reasons why restaurants standout in my standards.
>> CORRECT.

first, it's because of the signs or promotional materials in the restaurant.
>> CORRECT.

In Korea, signs and promoting stores and restaurants are put up everywhere, and people pay attention to them because they standout.
>> In Korea, signs and stores and restaurants promotions are put up everywhere, and people pay attention to them because they stand out.

Second, because I liked the interior of the restaurant, the appearance was good, or the mood was good.
>> Second, it's because I like the interior of the restaurant since the appearance or mood is good. 

Personally, I value interior design or atmosphere, but if these is an eye-catching interior, it seems to be more eye-catching than anywhere else.
>> I personally value interior design or atmosphere but if there is an eye-catching interior can be more captivating than any other space.

Third, it is a crowded place.
>> CORRECT.

When there are a lot of people in the restaurant, I wonder for reason. 
>> CORRECT.

Why is that restaurant crowded? As I think about it, I enter the restaurant.
>> CORRECT.

This may be one marketing strategy.
>> This may be one of the marketing strategies. 
>> Or: This may be a marketing strategy. 


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