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The song is the OST of the movie "Tian mi mi" (Almost a Love Story) and was sung by Teresa Teng.
The main characters of this movie are Leon Lai and Maggie Cheung.
I watched this movie 25 years ago.
The acting and music of the two male and female protagonists were in such good harmony, so it's been a long time, but the movie is always in my head.
The English title of the music is "The Moon Represents My Heart."
Both of them spent poor and difficult youth together in Hong Kong, but they had no choice but to break up.
After several years, they met again in New York and each other's beautiful memories came to mind with music.
If it's really beautiful love, even if they break up, I hope they meet again after a long time.
This movie and song expressed my wish so well.
I will practice this music more and try to play better than now.

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Hello David! You did a great job sharing your thoughts on the movie and song! Your response was well-structured and heartfelt. I made some adjustments to improve clarity and natural flow, especially in expressing emotions and events. You're doing really well David!

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The song is the OST of the movie "Tian Mi Mi" (Almost a Love Story) and was sung by Teresa Teng.
>> CORRECT


The main characters of this movie are Leon Lai and Maggie Cheung.
>> CORRECT


I watched this movie 25 years ago.
>> CORRECT


The acting and music of the two male and female protagonists were in such good harmony, so it's been a long time, but the movie is always in my head.

>> The acting and music of the two protagonists were in such good harmony that, even after a long time, the movie remains in my mind.


The English title of the music is "The Moon Represents My Heart."
>> CORRECT


Both of them spent poor and difficult youth together in Hong Kong, but they had no choice but to break up.
>> Both of them experienced a poor and difficult youth together in Hong Kong, but they had no choice but to break up.


After several years, they met again in New York and each other's beautiful memories came to mind with music.

>> After several years, they met again in New York, and their beautiful memories resurfaced through the music.


If it's really beautiful love, even if they break up, I hope they meet again after a long time.
>> If love is truly beautiful, even if a couple breaks up, I hope they reunite after a long time.


This movie and song expressed my wish so well.
>> This movie and song beautifully expressed my wish.


I will practice this music more and try to play better than now.

>> I will practice this music more and try to play better than I do now.

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