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회원님의 영작문

In Korea, it is not common to ask difficult requests among coworkers or friends.
That's why I rarely ask difficult requests from friends or colleagues.
In particular, borrowing or lending money within the workplace is strictly prohibited.
Money transactions between friends often end up damaging the relationship between friends.
Nevertheless, coworkers and friends sometimes ask me to lend them money. I have never accepted such a request.
And Korean workplaces have numerous evaluation systems for determining employees' promotions and salaries.
Such an evaluation system must be so fair that capable and high-performing employees should be promoted.
But many employees ask their bosses for promotions.
I refuse most such requests.
However, when I refuse, my relationship with my juniors often worsens.
So, even when I refuse, I have to be very considerate so as not to make my juniors feel bad.
In any case, it is very painful to receive requests from friends that are difficult for me to grant.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Soon Ho^^
Thank you for the detailed explanation.
_T. SHAY^^
***
In Korea, it is not common to ask difficult requests among coworkers or friends.
>>Correct
OR: In Korea, it is not part of our practices to ask difficult requests from our co-workers or friends.
That's why I rarely ask difficult requests from friends or colleagues.
>>Correct
OR: Because of that, I rarely ask difficult requests from friends or colleagues.
In particular, borrowing or lending money within the workplace is strictly prohibited.
>>Correct
OR: To give you a specific example, borrowing or lending money in the workplace is strictly prohibited.
Money transactions between friends often end up damaging the relationship between friends.
>>Correct
OR: Money-related things usually end up breaking the relationship between friends.
Nevertheless, coworkers and friends sometimes ask me to lend them money. 
>>Correct
OR: Nonetheless, some co-workers and friends still ask me to lend them money.
I have never accepted such a request.
>>Correct
OR: I have never lent them though.
And Korean workplaces have numerous evaluation systems for determining employees' promotions and salaries.
>>Correct
OR: And Korean companies have multiple evaluation systems for determining employees' promotions and salary increase.
Such an evaluation system must be so fair that capable and high-performing employees should be promoted.
>>Correct
OR: The evaluation system must be fair so promotions would be granted to high-performing employees.
But many employees ask their bosses for promotions.
>>Correct
OR: However, many employees ask their supervisors for promotions.
I refuse most such requests.
>>I refuse such requests.
OR: Most of the time, I refuse such requests.
However, when I refuse, my relationship with my juniors often worsens.
>>Correct
OR: However, I noticed that when I refuse their request, we usually grow apart.
So, even when I refuse, I have to be very considerate so as not to make my juniors feel bad.
>>Correct
OR: So, when I refuse, I make sure not to make them feel bad. 
In any case, it is very painful to receive requests from friends that are difficult for me to grant.
>>Correct
OR: In any situation, it is hardest thing to receive requests from friends that I know I can't grant.
OR: In any situation, it is hardest thing to receive requests from friends that I am not capable of granting.
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