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Question : When was the last time you did something to help the environment? Did you notice a change in your mood?

My answer : I saw the related environment news, when I was young.
The news point is that we are protect the environment of The earth.
That is why the next generation can live happily.
So, My mind is slowly changed, which I watched news.

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Great day, Chris!!!

The most important thing is trying your best. I know your can really learn from our daily activities. Be confident in speaking English because you can see yourself speaking the language well in days to come.

Have a great day~~~

Talk to you tomorrow and always be positive.

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Question : When was the last time you did something to help the environment? Did you notice a change in your mood?

My answer : I saw the related environment news, when I was young.
>>I saw the environmental news when I was young.
The news point is that we are protect the environment of The earth.
>>The news pointed our that we need to protect the Erath and its' environment.
That is why the next generation can live happily.
>>correct
So, My mind is slowly changed, which I watched news.
>>So, I changed my mind when I watched the news.
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