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Q : Have you ever heard about the MZ Generation before? What do you think about them?

A : Yes. I heared about the MZ Generation frequently. In Korea, many peoples use that word.
Many Koreans use the word MZ Generation on the Internet, TV show, Youtube, and SNS.
Many korean youtubers are dealing the subject about the MZ Generation. Like "The daily life of the MZ worker"
And i also called "MZ Generation" in Korea. Yeah, i know i am not young boy.
However, the age range of the MZ Generation is very wide in Korea.

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Hello Eddy!

Your answer is clear, and I can see that you understand how the MZ Generation is viewed in Korea. It's great that you included examples like TV shows, YouTube, and social media; this makes your answer feel more real and relatable!

To make your response even stronger, you could add a personal opinion about the MZ Generation. Do you think they are changing society in a good way? What makes them unique? Adding your own thoughts will make your answer even more interesting.

You're improving a lot. Keep up the great work! Your ideas are strong, and with more practice, your writing will feel even more natural.

~Teacher Cathy

 

Yes. I heared about the MZ Generation frequently.

>>Yes, I hear about the MZ Generation frequently.

In Korea, many peoples use that word.

>>In Korea, many people use that word.

Many Koreans use the word MZ Generation on the Internet, TV show, Youtube, and SNS.

>>Many Koreans use the word "MZ Generation" on the Internet, TV shows, YouTube, and SNS.

Many korean youtubers are dealing the subject about the MZ Generation.

>>Many Korean YouTubers are dealing with the subject of the MZ Generation.

Like "The daily life of the MZ worker"

>>Like "The daily life of an MZ worker".

And i also called "MZ Generation" in Korea.

>>And I am also called an "MZ Generation" in Korea.

Yeah, i know i am not young boy.

>>Yeah, I know I am not a young boy.

However, the age range of the MZ Generation is very wide in Korea.

>>CORRECT

OR>>However, the MZ Generation in Korea has a broad age range.

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