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What is the best traditional dessert in your country? Why do you think so?

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Well, I think it's puffed rice, Sikhye, and Sujeonggwa.
To introduce each food, puffed rice is a fried food or grains. Round puffed rice is common in korea.
Since it is a fried food with grains, it can soothe your appetite before eating, and puffed rice is a fried food, but it is not harmful to your health because is does not use oil. It is also one of my favorite desserts.
Sikhye and Sujeonggwa are one of the drinks, Sikhye is made using rice and Sujeonggwa is made using cinnamon.
Sikhye and Sujeonggwa are not that sweet and go well with any food. Also, I think it is a food that contains the wisdom of ancestors well because it plays a role in helping digestion.

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Hello, 


Thank you for submitting your answer with me. 
I really want to try these snacks that you mentioned. 

~ Teacher Gina


Well, I think it's puffed rice, Sikhye, and Sujeonggwa.
>> I think the items are puffed rice, sikhye, and sujeonggwa.

To introduce each food, puffed rice is a fried food or grains. Round puffed rice is common in korea.
>> To introduce each food, puffed rice is a fried food or grain. Round puffed rice is common in Korea.

Since it is a fried food with grains, it can soothe your appetite before eating, and puffed rice is a fried food, but it is not harmful to your health because is does not use oil. It is also one of my favorite desserts.
>> As a fried grain, puffed rice can help curb your appetite before a meal. Unlike many fried foods, it's generally considered healthy because it's made without oil. It's also one of my favorite snacks.

Sikhye and Sujeonggwa are one of the drinks, Sikhye is made using rice and Sujeonggwa is made using cinnamon.
>> Sikhye and sujeonggwa are two popular Korean drinks. Sikhye is made from rice, while sujeonggwa is made with cinnamon.

Sikhye and Sujeonggwa are not that sweet and go well with any food. 
>> CORRECT.

Also, I think it is a food that contains the wisdom of ancestors well because it plays a role in helping digestion.
>> Also, I think it is a food that contains the wisdom of our ancestors well because it plays a role in helping digestion.


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