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What activities do you like to do on a sunny day?

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I usually run on the park on a sunny day.
Drinking watermelon juice could be awesome after running under the Sun and also the function of all of the body muscles, nerves and canals might be improved by running.
I can feel fresh air and believe going healthy.
Moreover, I got light up of laundry stuff. If the things needs clean, sunny day will be the perfect day ever for laundry.

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Hi Seung Min!
Please take note of common expressions.
These are always a challenge for students.
However, in time, I know you will get them perfectly.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I usually run on the park on a sunny day.
>> I usually run at the park on a sunny day.
Drinking watermelon juice could be awesome after running under the Sun and also the function of all of the body muscles, nerves and canals might be improved by running.
>> Drinking watermelon juice is awesome after running under the sun, and running can also improve the function of the body's muscles, nerves, and circulatory system.
I can feel fresh air and believe going healthy.
>> I can feel the fresh air and I believe I am becoming healthier.
Moreover, I got light up of laundry stuff. 
>> Moreover, I take advantage of sunny days to do the laundry.
If the things needs clean, sunny day will be the perfect day ever for laundry.
>> If things need to be cleaned, a sunny day is the perfect time for it.



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