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I like to drink soda like coke, Fanta and so on. I often drink Fanta with grape flavor and Milkis which tastes milkshake. I avoid drinking zero sugar soda and beer. Soda with no sugar tastes weird and beer makes me feel sick. Me and my friend usually talk about our future job and childhood memory. Some friends start to talk about their boyfriend when they drunk.

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Hi,

Thanks for sharing what you like to drink. I like coke too, but I don't drink it very often. 

-Teacher Ash

I like to drink soda like coke, Fanta and so on.
>> CORRECT!

 I often drink Fanta with grape flavor and Milkis which tastes milkshake.
>>I often drink Fanta Grape and Milkis which tastes like milkshake.

 I avoid drinking zero sugar soda and beer. 
>> CORRECT!

Soda with no sugar tastes weird and beer makes me feel sick.
>>CORRECT!

 Me and my friend usually talk about our future job and childhood memory.
>> My friend and I usually talk about our future job and our childhood memories. 

 Some friends start to talk about their boyfriend when they drunk.
>> Some friends start talking about their boyfriends when they are drunk. 
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