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Rosé, a member of the globally renowned K-pop group BLACKPINK, has officially withdrawn from the Korea Music Copyright Association (KOMCA). This decision indicates that she will no longer be directly involved in managing her music copyrights within the association. The reasons behind her departure have not been publicly disclosed. What are the potential implications for an artist leaving a music copyright association?

Wow this topic is not easy to say also as a Korean. actually I don't know well about the system of Korea Music Copyright Association, but In Rosé's case, she is already worldwide pop star(just my opinion but...) so I think KOMCA doesn't need to manage her. and also I don't know everything there are many systems without KOMCA that can manage her money. like some company in USA...

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Wow this topic is not easy to say also as a Korean.
- Wow! This topic is also not easy to explain as a Korean.
actually I don't know well about the system of Korea Music Copyright Association, but In Rosé's case, she is already worldwide pop star(just my opinion but...) so I think KOMCA doesn't need to manage her. 
- Actually, I'm not familiar with the system of Korea Music Copyright Association, however, in Rosé's case, she is already a worldwide pop star, therefore, I think KOMCA doesn't need to manage her.
and also I don't know everything there are many systems without KOMCA that can manage her money. like some company in USA...
- In addition, I haven't got the faintiest idea about everything. There are systems without KOMCA that can manage her money, like some companies in the USA.
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