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What are some famous foods from your hometown?

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One of the most famous food in korea is kimchi.
kimchi is traditional food in korea. many people believe that kimchi is healthy food. because it is fermented.
it has lots of probiotics so when people eat that, it makes gut environment more healthier.
but i think other country people don't like smell of kimchi. becuase kimchi includes lots of galics and some fish source to be fermented and have an tasty.
but i like and almost korean people love kimchi.

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Good evening, Alice! 

Yes! Kimchi is such an important part of Korean cuisine. The fermentation process not only gives it a unique taste but also makes it super healthy! I know some people from other countries find the smell strong at first, but once they get used to it, many end up loving it.

- Kristine ^^ 

One of the most famous food in korea is kimchi.
>> One of the most famous foods in Korea is kimchi.
kimchi is traditional food in korea. 
>> Kimchi is a traditional food in Korea.
many people believe that kimchi is healthy food. because it is fermented.
>> Many people consider kimchi a healthy food because it is fermented.
it has lots of probiotics so when people eat that, it makes gut environment more healthier.
>> It contains a lot of probiotics, so when people eat it, it helps create a healthier gut environment.
but i think other country people don't like smell of kimchi. becuase kimchi includes lots of galics and some fish source to be fermented and have an tasty.
>> But I think people from other countries may not like the smell of kimchi because it contains a lot of garlic and some fish sauce for fermentation, which gives it a strong flavor.
but i like and almost korean people love kimchi.
>> But I like it, and most Korean people love kimchi.
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