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What is the best movie of all time for you? Why?

작성자: 이*윤
2025-03-03 1008

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My favorite genre is romantic comdey, so I hope the movie will meet that genre and my standard.
Even if the actors are not famous, if they are good ar acting, I think it can be the best movie.
Because if their acting is not excellent, many people can frown while watching a movie. Also, I don't think many people will be able to bear the long running time, seeing acting that is not excellent.
In addition, although it is not a profound movie, I think it is the best movie if it has a theme to think about or contains a big meaning in the movie.
I think it's good to have an individual's feeling after watching a movie, but I think a movie that tells and shares what each individual feels will mean a lot.
These days, the culture of watching movies several times and looking for things that you haven't seen in movie is spreading, so I hope there will be more movies that share those cultures.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello! 

Thank you for sharing your thoughts about romantic comedy films and your view of the best movie. 
I totally agree that there are movies that can be considered great even if they don't have popular actors, as long as they are talented and could portray the characters and story well. ^^ 

~ Teacher Gina


My favorite genre is romantic comdey, so I hope the movie will meet that genre and my standard.
>> My favorite genre is romantic comedy, so I hope the movie will match that genre and meet my standards.
>> Or: I love romantic comedies, so I hope the movie fits that genre and meets my expectations.
>> Or: Since my favorite genre is romantic comedy, I hope the movie aligns with that and lives up to my standards.

Even if the actors are not famous, if they are good ar acting, I think it can be the best movie.
>> Even if the actors are not famous, if they are good at acting, I think the movie can still be great.
>> Or: A movie can still be amazing even if the actors are not famous, as long as they are talented.

Because if their acting is not excellent, many people can frown while watching a movie. 
>> If their acting is not excellent, many people may feel disappointed while watching the movie.

Also, I don't think many people will be able to bear the long running time, seeing acting that is not excellent.
>> Also, I don't think many people will be able to endure a long movie if the acting is not good.

In addition, although it is not a profound movie, I think it is the best movie if it has a theme to think about or contains a big meaning in the movie.
>> In addition, even if a movie is not profound, I believe it can be great if it has a meaningful theme or message.

I think it's good to have an individual's feeling after watching a movie, but I think a movie that tells and shares what each individual feels will mean a lot.
>> I think it’s good for each person to have their own feelings after watching a movie, but a movie that expresses and shares those emotions can be even more meaningful.

These days, the culture of watching movies several times and looking for things that you haven't seen in movie is spreading, so I hope there will be more movies that share those cultures.
>> CORRECT. 
>> Or: These days, the trend of rewatching movies and discovering hidden details is growing, so I hope more films will embrace this culture.
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