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What other cuisines have you tried aside from Vietnamese cuisine ?

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2025-03-05 565

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There are a lot of foreign restaurants in Korea and also I traveled abroad a lot, so I could try other countries' cuisines.
But I am a middle aged man and I have been used to the taste of Korean food for a long time.
And when I traveled overseas, I always took a tour guided by a Korean and the Korean guide always took me to Korean restaurants.
So I don't have much experience trying foreign food and even if I have tried foreign food, I can't remember it in details.
My trip to Vietnam last October was my first trip without a guide.
So my friend and I tried as much local food as we could, but we soon got tired of it.
And to be honest, our English wasn't fluent and we couldn't speak Vietnamese at all, so we were limited in trying various local foods.
I really envy Filipinos who can speak English very well.
I will continue studying English so that my English becomes more fluent and I hope to try more local food when I travel abroad someday.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Soon Ho^^
Thank you for answering the question.
Yes, that's right.
Just keep on studying and learning. 
_T. SHAY^^
***
There are a lot of foreign restaurants in Korea and also I traveled abroad a lot, so I could try other countries' cuisines.
>>Correct
OR: I tried other cuisines because there are a lot of foreign restaurant in Korea and also because I travelled a lot overseas.
But I am a middle aged man and I have been used to the taste of Korean food for a long time.
>>Correct
OR: But I am a middle aged, and I am used to the taste of Korean food because I've been eating it for a long time.
And when I traveled overseas, I always took a tour guided by a Korean and the Korean guide always took me to Korean restaurants.
>>Correct
OR: And when I travelled overseas, I always hired a Korean tour guide, and the tour guide always took me to Korean restaurants.
So I don't have much experience trying foreign food and even if I have tried foreign food, I can't remember it in details.
>>So, I don't have much experience trying foreign food  and even if I have tried foreign food, I can't remember is in detail.
OR: So, I don't have much experience trying other cuisines and even if I did, it's hard to remember the details.
My trip to Vietnam last October was my first trip without a guide.
>>Correct
OR: My trip to Vietnam last year was the very first trip I had without a guide.
So my friend and I tried as much local food as we could, but we soon got tired of it.
>>Correct
OR: Given the opportunity, my friend and I tried as many local food as we could, but we soon got sick of it. 
And to be honest, our English wasn't fluent and we couldn't speak Vietnamese at all, so we were limited in trying various local foods.
>>And to be honest, we weren't fluent English speakers, and we couldn't speak Vietnamese at all, so we were limited in trying various local foods.
I really envy Filipinos who can speak English very well.
>>Correct
OR: I envy Filipinos who have excellent English skills.
I will continue studying English so that my English becomes more fluent and I hope to try more local food when I travel abroad someday.
>>I will continue studying English so that my English becomes more fluent, and I hope to try more local food when I travel abroad someday.
OR: I will keep on studying English until I become fluent, and I will try more local food when I travel abroad. 
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