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What kind of design or theme would you like your room to have?

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If it was to decorate my room, I think I would have decorated it with a simple design or theme.
I don't think I'm going to use promiscuous wallpaper like stripes or dot patterns and paint it in a prominent color like red or black.
But if I'm going to decorate the hotel's room, I'd like to try various themes.
For example, for guests who stay with their children, they create rooms decorated with their favorite characters, like the Frozen kingdom of Elsa, or like the adventurous Moana jungle.
Personally, I would like to decorate the room with the Harry Potter theme. It's like Hogwarts or a theme that exudes the feeling of each dormitory. When guests enter, I want them to become the main chracter of Harry Potter and feel like they are entering Hogwarts.

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Hi! 

Wow! I love the idea you shared for a hotel room. I really like Harry Potter a lot and I think a lot of people would want to stay in a room inspired by it. 
That would be so lovely! ^^ 

~ Teacher Gina


If it was to decorate my room, I think I would have decorated it with a simple design or theme.
>> If I were to decorate my room, I think I would choose a simple design or theme.

I don't think I'm going to use promiscuous wallpaper like stripes or dot patterns and paint it in a prominent color like red or black.
>> I don¡¯t think I would use bold wallpaper with stripes or polka dots, nor would I paint the walls in striking colors like red or black.

But if I'm going to decorate the hotel's room, I'd like to try various themes.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: If I had the chance to design a hotel room, I would love to explore various themes.

For example, for guests who stay with their children, they create rooms decorated with their favorite characters, like the Frozen kingdom of Elsa, or like the adventurous Moana jungle.
>> For example, for guests staying with children, I would design rooms featuring their favorite characters, such as Elsa¡¯s Frozen kingdom or Moana¡¯s adventurous jungle.

Personally, I would like to decorate the room with the Harry Potter theme. It's like Hogwarts or a theme that exudes the feeling of each dormitory. 
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: Personally, I would love to decorate a room with a Harry Potter theme, inspired by Hogwarts or the unique atmosphere of each dormitory. 

When guests enter, I want them to become the main chracter of Harry Potter and feel like they are entering Hogwarts.
>> When guests enter, I want them to feel like the main character in Harry Potter and experience the magic of Hogwarts.
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