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What is the most challenging part of your job or your studies? What is the most rewarding part?

The hardest part is world-economy downturn in my job.
My job is a oversea dept manager in our company.
For example, Ukraine-Russia war is make hard to me.

On the other hand
The most rewarding part is receive hopeful message from the our buyer.
They say that "Thank you for your support"

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Nice homework, Chris!!


Any piece of knowledge you acquire today has a value in achieving your goals in life. Continue to look for ways on how to improve our skills; it is a rewarding experience for you to see yourself speaking the English language well.

T. Jeny


The hardest part is world-economy downturn in my job.
>>The world economy downturn has had the hardest effect on my job.
My job is a oversea dept manager in our company.
>>I am working as an overseas department manager in my company.
For example, Ukraine-Russia war is make hard to me.

>>Thus the Ukraine-Russia war made a big impact on my job.
On the other hand 
The most rewarding part is receive hopeful message from the our buyer.
>>On the other hand, the most rewarding part of my job is receiving hopeful messages from our buyers.
They say that "Thank you for your support"
>>They say, "Thank you for your support"
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