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What\'s the most memorable experience you have with your dental technician?

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He's not with me in my clinic, he's working in a private laboratory.
His office is located about 10 minutes away by car.
Sometimes when discussions are needed, he come to my clinic to see and discuss the patient in person.
He is 58 years old.
The biggest memory I have received through him is hard work and sincerity in his work.
In some cases, if there was anything to reserch, he worked all night and left work at 4 or 5 am in the morning.
When he works, he doesn't do anything roughly.
He always strives to get things done perfectly.
His sincerity makes others trust him.
I always respect his sincerity.

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Hi David! Your writing is exceptionally well organized, and you¡¯ve done an impressive job of capturing this person¡¯s dedication and work ethic. The details you included truly enhance the story, making it both engaging and meaningful. Keep up the outstanding work!

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He's not with me in my clinic, he's working in a private laboratory.
>> He's not with me in my clinic; he's working in a private laboratory.

His office is located about 10 minutes away by car.
>> CORRECT

Sometimes when discussions are needed, he come to my clinic to see and discuss the patient in person.
>> Sometimes, when discussions are needed, he comes to my clinic to see and discuss the patient in person.

He is 58 years old.
>> CORRECT

The biggest memory I have received through him is hard work and sincerity in his work.
>> The most valuable lesson I have learned from him is the importance of hard work and sincerity in his profession.

In some cases, if there was anything to reserch, he worked all night and left work at 4 or 5 am in the morning.
>> In some cases, if there was anything to research, he would work all night and leave work at 4 or 5 a.m.

When he works, he doesn't do anything roughly.
>> When he works, he never does anything carelessly.

He always strives to get things done perfectly.
>> CORRECT

His sincerity makes others trust him.
>> CORRECT

I always respect his sincerity.
>> I have always respected his sincerity.
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