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Why do you prefer dining in rather than taking out?

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umm, threre are about three reason what i prefer dining in rather than taking out.
first, eating in restaurant is convienent, because don't need washing dishes.
only eating and leaving.
second, eating in restaurant is good mood and good atmosphere.
when i eating in restaurant, i can feel good about looking for out sight.
third, i can eating new order food.
most food delicious what eating right away.

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Hi, Hun!
I totally agree! It's really more convenient to eat at a restaurant, and like you said, at least you can eat it immediately. There are some foods that are best eaten right away, and ordering them for delivery or takeaway makes them not as delicious as eating them immediately at the restaurant.
- T. Caitlyn
umm, threre are about three reason what i prefer dining in rather than taking out.
>> There are about three reasons why I prefer dining in rather than taking out.
first, eating in restaurant is convienent, because don't need washing dishes.
>> First, eating in a restaurant is convenient because you don't need to wash dishes.
only eating and leaving.
>> You only eat and leave
second, eating in restaurant is good mood and good atmosphere.
>> Second, eating in a restaurant provides a good mood and atmosphere.
when i eating in restaurant, i can feel good about looking for out sight.
>> When I eat in a restaurant, I can feel good about looking at the outside view.
third, i can eating new order food.
>> Third, I can eat newly cooked food.
most food delicious what eating right away.
>> Most food is delicious when eaten right away.
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