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Do you like reading books or watching movies more? Why?

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I'd like to watch the movies better than read the books.
Because I have stopped reading book for several years so I would feel akward if I read the books, and then my concentrating time to read the book is very short.
When I was young, my environment is very friendly with the books but now my life is not close with the books.
Moreover watching the movies is more interesting and fascinateing to me.
In particular, the movies that I watched gave me some positive motivations.
Some movies has included the lessons for me.
Overall, based on my interest and my environment Iike more watching the movies.

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Hello Gloria!

Your answer is thoughtful and personal, which makes it really engaging to read. I love how you reflected on how your environment has influenced your preferences over time. It is interesting that movies give you motivation and life lessons. That is such a great way to look at them.

It is completely natural for our habits to change as we grow, and it is great that you have found something you truly enjoy. If you ever come across a movie that really inspires you, I would love to hear about it.

Keep expressing your thoughts like this. You are doing an amazing job.

~Teacher Cathy

 

I'd like to watch the movies better than read the books.

>>CORRECT

OR>>I prefer watching movies over reading books.

Because I have stopped reading book for several years so I would feel akward if I read the books, and then my concentrating time to read the book is very short.

>>Because I haven't read books for several years, I feel awkward when I try to read them, and my ability to concentrate is very limited.

When I was young, my environment is very friendly with the books but now my life is not close with the books.

>>When I was young, I was surrounded by books, but now they are no longer a big part of my life.

Moreover watching the movies is more interesting and fascinateing to me.

>>Moreover, watching movies is more interesting and fascinating for me.

In particular, the movies that I watched gave me some positive motivations.

>>CORRECT

OR>>In particular, the movies I have watched have given me positive motivation.

Some movies has included the lessons for me.

>>Some movies have included lessons for me.

Overall, based on my interest and my environment Iike more watching the movies.

>>Overall, based on my interests and environment, I prefer watching movies.

 

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