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2025-03-10 1061

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When I watch YouTube videos, I don't watch specific YouTubers but just watch videos that my Algorithm recommends. So actually I don't have a particular favorite Youtubers.
I will just share about a Youtuber whose video I enjoyed most recently. Channel name is 'hot-issue-ji' (in Korean it means "It is a hot issue~!") and it's run by a popular Korean comedian named Lee Su ji. Excluding the word 'hot' from the channel name, its Korean pronunciation is very similar to her name.
Her main content is parody of issues in South Korea. She once imitated intense Korean moms who wear same luxury brand outerwear all the time and speak in a fussy way. She exactly mimiced it with her crazy talent. Many comedians often make parodies but hers was unique. It was literally a hot issue in Korea that lots of that particular brand's outwears were on the second hand market being ashamed. She has started YouTube lately so I'm looking forward to her making other sarcastic videos using her gifted talent.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Ms. WooIn! It sounds like hot-issue-ji is such a fun channel! I love how Lee Su ji uses her unique sense of humor and talent for mimicry to dive into the quirks of South Korean culture and trends. Thank you for sharing!
-T. Sonny
When I watch YouTube videos, I don't watch specific YouTubers but just watch videos that my Algorithm recommends. 
>>When I watch YouTube videos, I don’t watch specific YouTubers; instead, I watch videos that my algorithm recommends.
So actually I don't have a particular favorite Youtubers.
>>So, I actually don’t have a particular favorite YouTuber.
I will just share about a Youtuber whose video I enjoyed most recently. 
>>However, I’ll share a YouTuber whose video I enjoyed most recently.

Channel name is 'hot-issue-ji' (in Korean it means "It is a hot issue~!") and it's run by a popular Korean comedian named Lee Su ji. 
>>The channel is called "hot-issue-ji" (which in Korean means "It’s a hot issue~!"), and it’s run by a popular Korean comedian named Lee Su-ji.

Excluding the word 'hot' from the channel name, its Korean pronunciation is very similar to her name.
>>Correct!
Her main content is parody of issues in South Korea. 
>>Her main content consists of parodies about issues in South Korea.
She once imitated intense Korean moms who wear same luxury brand outerwear all the time and speak in a fussy way.
>>For example, she once parodied intense Korean moms who wear the same luxury brand outerwear all the time and speak in a fussy way. 
She exactly mimiced it with her crazy talent. 
>>She perfectly mimicked this with her incredible talent.
Many comedians often make parodies but hers was unique. 
>>Correct!
It was literally a hot issue in Korea that lots of that particular brand's outwears were on the second hand market being ashamed. 
>>It became a hot issue in Korea because a lot of that particular brand’s outerwear had flooded the second-hand market, which caused some embarrassment.
She has started YouTube lately so I'm looking forward to her making other sarcastic videos using her gifted talent.
>>She recently started her YouTube channel, so I’m looking forward to seeing more sarcastic videos from her using her gifted talent.
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