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How do seasons affect your attitude ?

작성자: 박*호
2025-03-11 1094

회원님의 영작문

To be honest, I couldn't understand exactly the meaning of the question "How do seasons affect your attitude ?".
So I asked the Chat Gpt what the question meant.
And the Chat Gpt answered like this : this question is asking how different seasons (spring, summer, autumn, winter) change your mood or feelings. is it right ?
So I will say based on the Chat Gpt's answer.
As I already talked to you, my favorite season is spring.
In Korea, spring means a beginning.
In spring, the cold winter ends and flowers bloom and all schools start a new semester. and outdoor activities that were suspended during the winter can resume.
That's why I get excited when spring comes.
On the other hand, I get depressed in the winter because I have to finish the year and I can't do any outdoor activities.
Even though summer is hot and humid, I'm happy because I can go on a summer vacation to the beach or the mountains.
In autumn, I get sentimental because the leaves are falling and winter is approaching.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Soon Ho^^
Yes, Chat GPT is right.
Thank you for sharing. 
Some people are really affected by the seasons or weather.
In my case, sometimes I enjoy the rainy days. 
It's a good time to watch a movie while eating snacks (if I'm not busy). Or I can just stare at the window watching the raindrops. 
_T. SHAY^^
***
To be honest, I couldn't understand exactly the meaning of the question "How do seasons affect your attitude ?".
>>Correct
OR: Honestly, I didn't understand what the question is asking.
So I asked the Chat Gpt what the question meant.
>>So, I asked Chat GPT what the question meant.
And the Chat Gpt answered like this : this question is asking how different seasons (spring, summer, autumn, winter) change your mood or feelings. is it right ?
>>And Chat Gpt answered this way: this question is asking how different seasons (spring, summer, autumn, winter) change your mood or feelings. Is it right ?
So I will say based on the Chat Gpt's answer.
>>So, I will share my answer based on Chat GPT's answer.
As I already talked to you, my favorite season is spring.
>>As I already told you, my favorite season is spring.
In Korea, spring means a beginning.
>>In Korea, spring means start or beginning of something.
In spring, the cold winter ends and flowers bloom and all schools start a new semester. and outdoor activities that were suspended during the winter can resume.
>>In spring, the cold winter ends, flowers bloom, and all schools start a new semester. Aside from those, outdoor activities that were suspended during the winter can resume.
That's why I get excited when spring comes.
>>Correct
OR: Those are the things that excites me about spring.
On the other hand, I get depressed in the winter because I have to finish the year and I can't do any outdoor activities.
Even though summer is hot and humid, I'm happy because I can go on a summer vacation to the beach or the mountains.
>>On the other hand, I get depressed in winter because I have to finish the year, and I can't do any outdoor activities.
OR: On the other hand, I feel blue during winter because it means the year is about to end, and I can't do any outdoor activities.
Even though summer is hot and humid, I'm happy because I can go on a summer vacation to the beach or the mountains.
In autumn, I get sentimental because the leaves are falling and winter is approaching.
>>Correct
OR: In autumn, I get sentimental because the leaves are falling and winter is just around the corner.
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