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Korean culture that I like the most is that Koreans are used to doing everything quickly. Some says Koreans are impatient (which I totally agree), but sometimes because of that I can get the service what I want without waiting for a long time. For example, if I want to issue a certain certificate, I can get it right away by visiting office or sometimes by online. Also when things are broken, it is possible to get repair service by reservation on a near day. Since all Koreans are used to this quick system, I heard that it is hard for Koreans to adopt with the speed of the work in other countries.
There are some fun episodes that I read in SNS about this Korean culture. One impressing episode was that flight attendants could distinguish Koreans immediately in the plane because they are the only ones who wait for the flight meal, their table all prepared, even before flight attendant handed them a meal.
I hope this Korean culture to not be seemed like just an impatient personalities.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Ms. WooIn! It’s great that you appreciate the efficiency in Korean culture! The desire for quick results often gets labeled as impatience, but I like how you highlight that it’s more about getting things done efficiently, which can make life a lot easier!
-T. Sonny
Korean culture that I like the most is that Koreans are used to doing everything quickly. 
>>The Korean culture that I like the most is that Koreans are used to doing everything quickly.
Some says Koreans are impatient (which I totally agree), but sometimes because of that I can get the service what I want without waiting for a long time. 
>>Some say Koreans are impatient (which I totally agree with), but sometimes because of that, I can get the service I want without waiting for a long time.

For example, if I want to issue a certain certificate, I can get it right away by visiting office or sometimes by online. 
>>For example, if I need a certain certificate, I can get it instantly by visiting an office or sometimes even online.

Also when things are broken, it is possible to get repair service by reservation on a near day. 
>>Also, when you have something that needs repairing, it's possible to book a repair service on short notice.

Since all Koreans are used to this quick system, I heard that it is hard for Koreans to adopt with the speed of the work in other countries.
>>Since all Koreans are used to this quick system, I’ve heard that it is hard for Koreans to adjust to the pace of work in other countries.

There are some fun episodes that I read in SNS about this Korean culture. 
>>There are some interesting episodes I've read on social media about this aspect of Korean culture.
One impressing episode was that flight attendants could distinguish Koreans immediately in the plane because they are the only ones who wait for the flight meal, their table all prepared, even before flight attendant handed them a meal.
>>One impressive episode was that flight attendants could distinguish Koreans immediately on the plane because they are the only ones who wait for the flight meal, with their tables all prepared, even before the flight attendants hand them the meal.
I hope this Korean culture to not be seemed like just an impatient personalities.
>>I hope this Korean culture is not seen as just impatience.
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