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Do you think the influence of influencers is here to stay, or do you think it is a passing trend?

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I believe the era of influencers have just started and their popularities would easily outpace the ones of actors/actresses in near future. This is due to a change in the media trend. Until the early 2010s, many people relied on television for the latest trends. Therefore, the actors/actresses could yield influences from what they wear and what they do on the TV shows. However, this trend has changed drastically lately as many social media have emerged. Now many people rely on social media to get to know the latest trends. In such trends, the role of followers on social media is crucial because this can be a parameter of how many people can be influenced. According to the casting directors, they put emphasis on social media followers because those the visible indicators show how many people would watch movie. Accordingly, the influence of influencers would stay because of the changing media trends that accompanied by visible indicators which is followers.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Thank you for this Aciel!

I believe the era of influencers have just started and their popularities would easily outpace the ones of actors/actresses in near future. 
>>> correct  
>>>> OR: I believe the era of influencers have just started and their popularities would easily outshine/surpass the ones of actors/actresses in near future. 
This is due to a change in the media trend. 
>>> correct  
Until the early 2010's, many people relied on television for the latest trends. 
>>> correct  
>>> OR: Until the early 2010's, many people consumed media through televisions. 
Therefore, the actors/actresses could yield influences from what they wear and what they do on the TV shows. 
>>> correct   
However, this trend has changed drastically lately as many social media have emerged. 
>>> correct   
Now many people rely on social media to get to know the latest trends. 
>>> correct   
In such trends, the role of followers on social media is crucial because this can be a parameter of how many people can be influenced. 
>>>   correct 
According to the casting directors, they put emphasis on social media followers because those the visible indicators show how many people would watch movie. 
>>>   According to the casting directors, they put emphasis on social media following because those are the visible indicators to show how many people would watch the movie. 
Accordingly, the influence of influencers would stay because of the changing media trends that accompanied by visible indicators which is followers.
>>>    Accordingly, the influence of influencers would stay because of the changing media trends accompanied by visible indicators which is the number of followers.
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