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I think it is better to be strict classes. Because I studied hard to the strict teacher .
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Hi, Michelle!
You are right! When we were young, we didn't like strict teachers, but in their classes, we studied the hardest because we were scared to be scolded by them. So, in a way, our fear turned into motivation, making us learn more.
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