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It is commonly seen that the higher positions in the workplace, the larger money they earn. I totally agree with this salary structure, considering their role in companies.

First of all, they setting company's vison and direction. They usally plays a key role in organization and management by giving employees clear guidance. In order to set lucrative direction, they have to check every thing ranging from overall plan to detail things. Furthermore, they take responsibility of decions which they conformed. In general, most huge and important decisions are made by directors. If they made a wrong decision entails some risks, they should take the responsibility and regisn int he worst senario.

In conclusion, given that CEO make great effort to their work, they worth to earn big salary. I believe this kind of salary structure will continue for a long while.

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It is commonly seen that the higher positions in the workplace, the larger money they earn. 
>> It is commonly observed that the higher a person¡¯s position in the workplace, the more money they earn.
I totally agree with this salary structure, considering their role in companies.
>> Correct
First of all, they setting company's vison and direction. 
>> First of all, they set the company's vision and direction.
They usally plays a key role in organization and management by giving employees clear guidance. 
>> They usually play a key role in organization and management by giving employees clear guidance.
In order to set lucrative direction, they have to check every thing ranging from overall plan to detail things. 
>> In order to set a lucrative direction, they have to check everything, ranging from the overall plan to detailed aspects.
Furthermore, they take responsibility of decions which they conformed. 
>> Furthermore, they take responsibility for the decisions they make.
In general, most huge and important decisions are made by directors. 
>> Correct
If they made a wrong decision entails some risks, they should take the responsibility and regisn int he worst senario.
>> If they make a wrong decision that entails risks, they must take responsibility and resign as the worst-case scenario.
In conclusion, given that CEO make great effort to their work, they worth to earn big salary. 
>> In conclusion, given that CEOs put great effort into their work, they deserve to earn a high salary.
I believe this kind of salary structure will continue for a long while.
>> Correct



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