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I hold my mind every day. I try to understand other people. I walk of many thought day. so I reduce my thought.

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1. I hold my mind every day. 
>> I have a lot of things on my mind every day. 

2. I try to understand other people. 
>> CORRECT 

3. I walk of many thought day. so I reduce my thought.
>> I tend to overthink many things so I try to avoid thinking too much. 
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