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Difference between public and private hospitals

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First, private hospitals have a better accessibility than public ones. If you want to see a doctor of public hospitals, you have to make an appointment with the doctor in advance. Sometimes you can't make an appointment because the doctor is busy. Secondly, all staff including doctors are kinder and all procedures or services are offered very quickly. Third, the quality of the practices is as high as that of bicycle public hospitals. Lastly, you can use private hospitals everywhere within walking distance.

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Hi, Gi Yean!
I can relate to this. It's the same in my country. Most private hospitals and clinics are more accessible, and we can go there anytime for consultations. Well, we can also visit public hospitals in my country even without an appointment, but we have to wait for several hours before we get to see the doctor.
- T. Caitlyn 
First, private hospitals have a better accessibility than public ones. 
>> First, private hospitals have better accessibility than public ones.
If you want to see a doctor of public hospitals, you have to make an appointment with the doctor in advance. 
>> CORRECT 
Sometimes you can't make an appointment because the doctor is busy. 
>> CORRECT 
Secondly, all staff including doctors are kinder and all procedures or services are offered very quickly. 
>> Secondly, all the staff, including doctors, are kinder, and all procedures or services are offered very quickly.
Third, the quality of the practices is as high as that of bicycle public hospitals. 
>> Third, the quality of the practices is as high as that of public hospitals.
Lastly, you can use private hospitals everywhere within walking distance.
>> Lastly, you can find private hospitals everywhere within walking distance.
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