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What life choices did you regret the most?

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2025-03-14 1098

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Umm... it is very tough question. Actually, I don't like regret, so consciously I try to forget life choices and those are also background for growing up me, I think. Definitely, my current situation is belong on the good side. However, I do not love mathematics and science. I am more interested in liberal arts, humanities, law. So I want to be a police officer still and I will try.
When I was young, my older brother is excellent on mathematics and science. I envied that, so I want to win my brother. So, when I entered high school, I chose science instead of choosing humanities such as Korean and English, which I was good at. If the biggest regret is that I would choose the one I am better at.
When I took liberal arts classes at university, the humanities professor asked me if you would like to study more about my talent in the humanities. However, I feel sorry that I went this way considering money and reality..

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Seo Yeon~
I was surprised to learn about your areas of interest. To be honest, I was a little saddened to learn that you had to change your field because of a lack of resources, but that's the reality. However, that does not always imply that we are headed in the wrong direction. Things occur on purpose.^__^
Chammy
Umm... it is very tough question. 
>> It's a very tough question.
Actually, I don't like regret, so consciously I try to forget life choices and those are also background for growing up me,
>> Actually, I don't like regret, so consciously, I try to forget life choices, and those are also the background for growing up me,
OR
>> Since I dislike regret, I deliberately strive to forget the decisions I've made in my life, which also served as the backdrop for my upbringing.
I think. Definitely, my current situation is belong on the good side. 
>> I definitely think that my current situation belongs to the good side. 
However, I do not love mathematics and science. 
>> Correct
I am more interested in liberal arts, humanities, law. 
>> I am more interested in liberal arts, humanities, and law. 
So I want to be a police officer still and I will try.
>> So I still try to be a police officer.
When I was young, my older brother is excellent on mathematics and science.
>> When I was young, my older brother was excellent in mathematics and science.
 I envied that, so I want to win my brother.
>> I envied that, so I wanted to beat my brother.
 So, when I entered high school, I chose science instead of choosing humanities such as Korean and English, which I was good at.
>  So, when I entered high school, I chose science instead of humanities such as Korean and English, which I was good at.
 If the biggest regret is that I would choose the one I am better at.
>>  If I could change the biggest regret, I would choose the one I am better at.
When I took liberal arts classes at university, the humanities professor asked me if you would like to study more about my talent in the humanities. 
>> When I took liberal arts classes at university, the humanities professor asked me if I would like to study more about my talent in the humanities. 
However, I feel sorry that I went this way considering money and reality..
>> Correct
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