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The growing popularity of learning foreign languages has brought about the biggest single change in the way we spend our effort.
I agree that studying different languages is essential some extent.

Advanced devices might be a perfect helper between people who use different mother languages like English and Korean.
Although the devices can translate sentences perfectly, they can not replace our real talking.
The conversation includes many things like mood, tempo, body languages, and gestures as well as just words.
The translators can change words immediately but they can not express user's emotion.
People need to learn foreign languages.

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Hi Seung Min!
You are on a roll!
Please memorize the common terms used in the suggestions
You're becoming better in writing.
The important thing now is retention.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
The growing popularity of learning foreign languages has brought about the biggest single change in the way we spend our effort.
>> Correct
I agree that studying different languages is essential some extent.
>> I agree that studying different languages is essential to some extent.
Advanced devices might be a perfect helper between people who use different mother languages like English and Korean.
>> Advanced devices can be a great help for people who speak different native languages, such as English and Korean.
Although the devices can translate sentences perfectly, they can not replace our real talking.
>> Although these devices can translate sentences perfectly, they cannot replace real conversations.
The conversation includes many things like mood, tempo, body languages, and gestures as well as just words.
>> A conversation includes many aspects, such as mood, tempo, body language, and gestures as well as words.
The translators can change words immediately but they can not express user's emotion.
>> Translators can change words instantly, but they cannot express the user's emotions.
People need to learn foreign languages.
>> Correct




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