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Q : Have you ever wished for something that others thought would happen "when pigs fly"? What was it, and did it ever happen? Describe your experience and how you felt about it.

A : Yes i have. I wanted to be a lotto winner when i bought a lotto.
However, as you know i could not be a lotto winner.
Before lotto numbers were announced, i believed i can win.
But, like many people, i did not get a even $1.
I felt that a lotto is just buying hope and expectation.
Nowadays, i hardly buy it. But, when i buy it, i can have expectation until numbers are announced.
I think it is not bad to feel this emotion sometimes.

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Hi Eddy!

This is such a relatable and fun essay. Thank you for doing your homework again. It feels so nice to read your writing.

Your story perfectly captures the excitement and hope that comes with buying a lottery ticket. I love how you described your feelings before and after the results. It really makes your experience feel real. The way you said that the lottery is about "buying hope and expectation" is very thoughtful and true.

Even though winning might be like "when pigs fly," the little excitement and hope it brings can be enjoyable. Keep writing with this honesty and charm. You are doing great.

~Teacher Cathy

Yes i have. I wanted to be a lotto winner when i bought a lotto.

>>Yes, I have. I wanted to be a lotto winner when I bought a lotto ticket.

However, as you know i could not be a lotto winner.

>>CORRECT

OR>>However, as you know, the chances of being a lotto winner is very slim.

Before lotto numbers were announced, i believed i can win.

>>Before the lotto numbers were announced, I believed I could win.

But, like many people, i did not get a even $1.

>>But, like many people, I did not even get $1.

I felt that a lotto is just buying hope and expectation.

>>I felt that playing the lotto is just buying hope and expectation.

Nowadays, i hardly buy it.

>>CORRECT

OR>>Nowadays, I rarely buy it.

But, when i buy it, i can have expectation until numbers are announced.

>>But when I buy it, I can have expectations until the numbers are announced.

I think it is not bad to feel this emotion sometimes.

>>CORRECT

OR>>I think it's not bad to experience this feeling occasionally.

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