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I think chef is the most important job in the future.
Eating industry will be developed although the world is changed scientifically.
It will be existed untill people are dead.
Eating food is the human's desire which they can't give up.
I don't believe which robot or computer programs can imitate the human's skill to cook and sense of its taste with tongue.

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Good morning, Ms. Sunny!
I appreciate your effort in writing and thank you for giving your answers in detail. 
They said that there are a lot of people becoming poor these days. I don't understand which area were they talking about because if you can notice, restaurants are always full of people, especially during lunchtime. Well, it is our basic need as what you have said. Have a good time!
Aki~


I think chef is the most important job in the future.
>>>  I think the chef is the most important job in the future.

Eating industry will be developed although the world is changed scientifically.
>>> The food industry will be developed although the world has changed scientifically.

It will be existed untill people are dead.
>>> It will exist until people die.

Eating food is the human's desire which they can't give up.
>>> Eating is the human's desire which they can't give up.

I don't believe which robot or computer programs can imitate the human's skill to cook and sense of its taste with tongue.
>>> I don't believe which robot or computer program can imitate the human's skill to cook and the sense its taste.

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