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Hey there, Na Eun. It's great seeing you practice your writing skills once again. I'm glad to know you were able to overcome math and even get better at it. Thank you for sharing your thoughts and experiences on the homework topic. Have a good night and see you tomorrow in class! ~Teacher Jane ^__^


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