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What do you think of gambling?

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I sometimes make a bet with my friends, such as buying coffee or meal. But if the price increases, it seems similar to gambling. I think irresponsible gains are dangerous. Even if it's the first prize in the lottery. That means it's easy to lose as much as it is easy to earn. People, including me, try to control themselves well, but when they fall into addiction, it's not easy to come out. That's why we should always be vigilant.

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Hello, Seo Yeon~
I suppose I have never bet with anyone. I had fun when I read your first sentence... Perhaps because they typically expect me to cover the expenses, leaving us with nothing to bet on. Hmm! How unfair that may be, hahahahah:D
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I sometimes make a bet with my friends, such as buying coffee or meal. 
>> I sometimes make a bet with my friends, such as buying coffee or a meal. 
But if the price increases, it seems similar to gambling. 
OR
>> However, it is comparable to gambling if it involves a bigger amount.
I think irresponsible gains are dangerous.
OR
>> I believe imprudent profits are risky.
 Even if it's the first prize in the lottery. 
OR
>>Regardless of whether it's the lottery's top prize.
That means it's easy to lose as much as it is easy to earn. 
OR
>> This implies that losing is as simple as earning.
People, including me, try to control themselves well, but when they fall into addiction, it's not easy to come out.
OR
>> Even though I make a good effort to restrain myself, it might be difficult to break free from addiction.
 That's why we should always be vigilant.
OR
>> Therefore, we must be conscious at all times. 
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