¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽг»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

Talk about the kinds of projects your company has.

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ¹Ú*È£
2025-03-20 718

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

My company is a public enterprise established by Gyeonggi Province, the largest local government in Korea, which surrounds Seoul.
My company carries out various local development projects for local residents, including the construction of new cities, industrial complexes, and public housing.
Among them, I would like to introduce the construction of new cities.
The new cities my company constructs are not improvements to existing old cities.
The old city has narrow roads, no parks, and overhead power lines, making it inconvenient for people to live in.
So my company buys all the buildings and land in a certain section of the old city.
Then, we demolish them all and build wide roads, parks, schools, public facilities, and houses.
Of course, all the power lines are installed underground.
In Korea, new cities are the most preferred by people because they are convenient to live in.
Of course, I also live in a new city.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Hi, Soon Ho^^
Thank you for sharing.
It seems like the company plays a big role in your community.
_T. SHAY^^
***

My company is a public enterprise established by Gyeonggi Province, the largest local government in Korea, which surrounds Seoul.
>>Correct
OR: My company is a public enterprise established by Gyeonggi Province, Korea's largest local government, which surrounds Seoul.

My company carries out various local development projects for local residents, including the construction of new cities, industrial complexes, and public housing.
>>Correct
OR: My company undertakes various local development projects for residents, including building new cities, industrial complexes, and public housing.

Among them, I would like to introduce the construction of new cities.
>>Correct
OR: I would like to specifically talk about the construction of new cities.

The new cities my company constructs are not improvements to existing old cities.
>>The new cities my company construct are not done by improving or beautifying existing old cities.
The old city has narrow roads, no parks, and overhead power lines, making it inconvenient for people to live in.
>>Correct
OR: The old city's narrow roads, lack of parks, and overhead power lines make it less convenient for residents.
So my company buys all the buildings and land in a certain section of the old city.
>>Correct
OR: So my company acquires all the buildings and land in a designated area of the old city.

Then, we demolish them all and build wide roads, parks, schools, public facilities, and houses.
>>Correct
OR: We tear down all existing structures and replace them with spacious roads, parks, schools, public facilities, and modern housing.

Of course, all the power lines are installed underground.
>>Correct
OR: Of course, we use an underground wiring system.

In Korea, new cities are the most preferred by people because they are convenient to live in.
>>In Korea, people prefer new cities the most because they are convenient to live in.
Of course, I also live in a new city.
>>Correct
OR: Of course, like the other people I also live in a new city.
¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
142329 What¡¯s your favorite memory with your siblings? ¼Û*ÀÚ ¿Ï·á 2025-02-06 2
142328 Homework & Question ÀÌ*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2025-02-06 1198
142327 dairy ±è*³ë ¿Ï·á 2025-02-06 1280
142326 a big house ¹Î*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2025-02-06 1
142325 Have you ever been in a situation where you had to say no to a... ÀÓ*¹Ì ¿Ï·á 2025-02-06 1302
142324 Homework ÀÌ*¹Î ¿Ï·á 2025-02-06 1055
142323 next lesson Á¶*Èñ ¿Ï·á 2025-02-06 1563
142322 How do you feel about being Top 1 in your violin class? ³ë*ö ¿Ï·á 2025-02-06 1545
142321 What makes a conversation interesting ? ¹Ú*È£ ¿Ï·á 2025-02-06 1129
142320 2/5 Homework ±Ç*ºó ¿Ï·á 2025-02-06 0
142319 Homework ±è*´Ô ¿Ï·á 2025-02-06 1570
142318 Native language ÇÑ*¿ø ¿Ï·á 2025-02-06 1544
142317 Is a bucket list necessary? ±Ç*Áø ¿Ï·á 2025-02-06 3
142316 When was the last time you attended a wedding? Tell me something... ÀÌ*ÁØ ¿Ï·á 2025-02-06 1332
142315 Homework ÀÌ*¹Î ¿Ï·á 2025-02-05 1704
142314 homework ±è*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2025-02-05 1591
142313 social media ÃÖ*ȯ ¿Ï·á 2025-02-05 1492
142312 What kind of workmates do you want to work with? Why? ÀÌ*À± ¿Ï·á 2025-02-05 1501
142311 What¡¯s the most common accident you have at home? ÀÌ*¹ü ¿Ï·á 2025-02-05 3
142310 home work Àå*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2025-02-05 1486

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ ͏°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öư Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽбÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î Çϰí ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04