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Talk about the kinds of projects your company has.

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2025-03-20 832

회원님의 영작문

My company is a public enterprise established by Gyeonggi Province, the largest local government in Korea, which surrounds Seoul.
My company carries out various local development projects for local residents, including the construction of new cities, industrial complexes, and public housing.
Among them, I would like to introduce the construction of new cities.
The new cities my company constructs are not improvements to existing old cities.
The old city has narrow roads, no parks, and overhead power lines, making it inconvenient for people to live in.
So my company buys all the buildings and land in a certain section of the old city.
Then, we demolish them all and build wide roads, parks, schools, public facilities, and houses.
Of course, all the power lines are installed underground.
In Korea, new cities are the most preferred by people because they are convenient to live in.
Of course, I also live in a new city.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Soon Ho^^
Thank you for sharing.
It seems like the company plays a big role in your community.
_T. SHAY^^
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My company is a public enterprise established by Gyeonggi Province, the largest local government in Korea, which surrounds Seoul.
>>Correct
OR: My company is a public enterprise established by Gyeonggi Province, Korea's largest local government, which surrounds Seoul.
My company carries out various local development projects for local residents, including the construction of new cities, industrial complexes, and public housing.
>>Correct
OR: My company undertakes various local development projects for residents, including building new cities, industrial complexes, and public housing.
Among them, I would like to introduce the construction of new cities.
>>Correct
OR: I would like to specifically talk about the construction of new cities.
The new cities my company constructs are not improvements to existing old cities.
>>The new cities my company construct are not done by improving or beautifying existing old cities.
The old city has narrow roads, no parks, and overhead power lines, making it inconvenient for people to live in.
>>Correct
OR: The old city's narrow roads, lack of parks, and overhead power lines make it less convenient for residents.
So my company buys all the buildings and land in a certain section of the old city.
>>Correct
OR: So my company acquires all the buildings and land in a designated area of the old city.
Then, we demolish them all and build wide roads, parks, schools, public facilities, and houses.
>>Correct
OR: We tear down all existing structures and replace them with spacious roads, parks, schools, public facilities, and modern housing.
Of course, all the power lines are installed underground.
>>Correct
OR: Of course, we use an underground wiring system.
In Korea, new cities are the most preferred by people because they are convenient to live in.
>>In Korea, people prefer new cities the most because they are convenient to live in.
Of course, I also live in a new city.
>>Correct
OR: Of course, like the other people I also live in a new city.
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