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Are you satisfied with the changes happening around you?

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Yes. I like changes around me.

We are living the days, and also get problems and solutions around us.
Those are all changes from life.
There will be negative and positive results.

I think both are helpful to our life. Because we can grow up through solving a problem, and also learn message from positive results.
Actually we feel very bad, when we face some problems.
But most important thing we should know is that solution of problems will be helpful to live a better life.

So, I would like to answer today's question that all of changes around me are satisfactory whatever results are.

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Happy Friday, Lee!
As the saying goes, change is the only constant thing in this world. You just have to embrace it because no one can resist change.
Happy Weekend!
Aki~


Yes. I like changes around me.
>>> Yes, I like the changes around me.

We are living the days, and also get problems and solutions around us.
>> CORRECT!

Those are all changes from life.
>> CORRECT!

There will be negative and positive results.
>> CORRECT!

I think both are helpful to our life. Because we can grow up through solving a problem, and also learn message from positive results.
>>> I think both are helpful to our life because we can grow up through solving a problem, and also learn messages from positive results.

Actually we feel very bad, when we face some problems.
>> Actually,  we feel terrible when we face some problems.

But most important thing we should know is that solution of problems will be helpful to live a better life.
>> But the most important thing we should know is that solutions to problems will be helpful to live a better life.

So, I would like to answer today's question that all of changes around me are satisfactory whatever results are.
>>> So, I would like to answer today's question that all of the changes around me are satisfactory whatever the results are.

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