¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽг»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

favorite hobby

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ÀÌ*¿¬
2025-03-21 944

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

I have been interested in barista since I was in high school. I got a barista license and started to have a hobby while working part-time. I learned that I could perfect my skills by practicing while working part-time. I took a class in a club called barista at school and tried it for the first time
I got a barista license and worked hard to get a passion and relieved my stress by serving coffee and drinks to customers. I was able to think creatively about recipes while spending time working part-time. It became a bigger effort and gave me a sense of accomplishment.
In the future, I want to study hard to become a barista or work part-time to improve my skills and gain experience as a full-time employee or manager, and open my own cafe in the future. I also want to develop various drink recipes and try new things. I hope that becomes my job.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Hello Cindy,

This is fantastic! I can really see your dedication, and I love how passionate you are about being a barista. You are not just learning a skill; you are putting in the effort, practicing, and finding ways to improve. That kind of mindset is exactly what will help you succeed, not just in OPIc but in anything you set your mind to.

Your journey, from discovering your interest in high school to earning your barista license and gaining hands-on experience, shows your strong work ethic. You do not just dream about your goals; you take action to make them happen. That is something to be really proud of.

I have seen so much improvement in your speaking, and I know we are going to work hard together to get you a great score on the OPIc test. Keep going, keep practicing, and do not be afraid to challenge yourself. You have got this. I am curious, what is your favorite coffee to make, and do you have a signature recipe yet?

~Teacher Cathy

 

I have been interested in barista since I was in high school.

>>I have been interested in becoming a barista since I was in high school.

I got a barista license and started to have a hobby while working part-time.

>>CORRECT

OR>>I earned a barista license and developed it into a hobby while working part-time.

I learned that I could perfect my skills by practicing while working part-time.

>>CORRECT

OR>>I realized that I could refine my skills through practice while working part-time.

I took a class in a club called barista at school and tried it for the first time

>>CORRECT

OR>>I took a barista class in a school club and tried it for the first time.

I got a barista license and worked hard to get a passion and relieved my stress by serving coffee and drinks to customers.

>>CORRECT

OR>>I earned a barista license and worked hard to develop my passion while relieving stress by serving coffee and drinks to customers.

I was able to think creatively about recipes while spending time working part-time.

>>CORRECT

OR>>While working part-time, I was able to think creatively about developing new recipes.

It became a bigger effort and gave me a sense of accomplishment.

>>CORRECT

OR>>It required more effort but gave me a strong sense of accomplishment.

In the future, I want to study hard to become a barista or work part-time to improve my skills and gain experience as a full-time employee or manager, and open my own cafe in the future.

>>In the future, I want to study hard to become a barista, work part-time to improve my skills, gain experience as a full-time employee or manager, and eventually open my own café.

I also want to develop various drink recipes and try new things.

>>CORRECT

OR>>I also want to create a variety of drink recipes and explore new ideas.

I hope that becomes my job.

>>CORRECT

OR>>I hope that turns into my career.

¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
141695 My feelings when I make a choice for other people ±è*¹Î ¿Ï·á 2024-12-28 2255
141694 Which place would you never consider visiting? Why? ¼Û*ÀÚ ¿Ï·á 2024-12-27 1
141693 What kind of ideas do you consider to be \"great\"? ÀÌ*Èñ ¿Ï·á 2024-12-27 1
141692 How can we educate others about environmental issues? ¹è*ºó ¿Ï·á 2024-12-27 1819
141691 Homework ·ù*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2024-12-27 1723
141690 How did you handle moments of frustration or stress during the... ¿À*¿µ ¿Ï·á 2024-12-27 1791
141689 Homework & Question ÀÌ*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2024-12-27 1491
141688 What advice would you give to someone who just got into a minor... ¿À*¿µ ¿Ï·á 2024-12-27 1706
141687 What activities do Korean do during Seollal or the Korean New... ¼Û*ÀÚ ¿Ï·á 2024-12-27 1
141686 >Did you like asking for help from your colleagues when you... ¼Û*ÀÚ ¿Ï·á 2024-12-27 2
141685 Homework ÀÌ*¼÷ ¿Ï·á 2024-12-27 1732
141684 Regular maintenance ¾ç*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2024-12-27 1778
141683 Which is better for young people in order to prepare for the... ¼Õ*Èñ ¿Ï·á 2024-12-26 1897
141682 Homework ±è*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2024-12-26 1
141681 Are you a good sport? Explain. Â÷*Áø ¿Ï·á 2024-12-26 1708
141680 What do you think is the worst sport ever created? Why? Â÷*Áø ¿Ï·á 2024-12-26 1517
141679 It was a fantastic trip ever in Jeju Island! ±è*¹Î ¿Ï·á 2024-12-26 1771
141678 The situation that suits me well nowadays ±è*¹Î ¿Ï·á 2024-12-26 1498
141677 Homework ÇÑ*Áø ¿Ï·á 2024-12-26 1
141676 Are there specific rules for smoking areas? Give me some... ÀÌ*ÈÆ ¿Ï·á 2024-12-26 1916

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ ͏°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öư Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽбÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î Çϰí ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04