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I don't know exactly how they keep the balance . I think that they try to keep the city clean. While traveling the city, I was impressed with the clean surroundings, including historic attractions. And except convenient public transportation, they rarely redevelop the city to protect their heritage. That's why the city has more natural and cultural heritage. Plus, to prevent overtourrism, they are imposing tourist tax and will increase the tax.

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Hi, Gi Yean!
I see! When you mentioned Kyoto imposing a tourist tax to prevent overtourism, it made me realize that they are doing their best to protect its heritage. I think it's a good thing because, even though a lot of cities and countries need tourists to generate funds, maintaining culture should be the priority. What about you? What do you think about their plan to impose a tax?
- T. Caitlyn
I don't know exactly how they keep the balance . 
>> CORRECT
I think that they try to keep the city clean. 
>> CORRECT
While traveling the city, I was impressed with the clean surroundings, including historic attractions. 
>> CORRECT
And except convenient public transportation, they rarely redevelop the city to protect their heritage. 
>> Except for convenient public transportation, they rarely redevelop the city to protect its heritage.
That's why the city has more natural and cultural heritage. 
>> CORRECT
Plus, to prevent overtourrism, they are imposing tourist tax and will increase the tax.
>> Plus, to prevent overtourism, they are imposing a tourist tax and plan to increase it.
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