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What is your opinion about \'wild goose father\' concept?

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I don¡¯t like the ¡®Wild Goose Father¡¯ concept. I think it is important for a family to live together. However, a wild goose father lives apart from his family to educate his children.

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Hi,Racheal! I agree that some sacrifice have to be made in order to give the best to our children. Parents will do everything for their children indeed. Thank you for your idea. See you!
--Teacher Anji


I don¡¯t like the ¡®Wild Goose Father¡¯ concept.
>> CORRECT
I think it is important for a family to live together.
>> CORRECT
However, a wild goose father lives apart from his family to educate his children.
>> However, a wild goose father lives apart from his family so he can have his children educated.
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