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They are very harmful everyone like gambling, smoke and marijuana and so on.

The meaning of tax-free is stimulate that people join it to do more.

So I oppose about the tax free policy of gambling.

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Ms. Lily!
I think this is the disadvantage of tax- fee services. People enjoy the service without any obligations.
Thank you for this, 
Aki~

We know that duty free shop is one of the policy of encouraging for foreigner's purchases including countrymen.
>>>  We know that duty duty-free shop is one of the policies encouraging foreigners' purchases, including countrymen.

They are very harmful everyone like gambling, smoke and marijuana and so on.
>>> They are very harmful; everyone likes gambling, smoking, marijuana, and so on.

The meaning of tax-free is stimulate that people join it to do more.
>>> The meaning of tax-free is stimulating people to join or do more.

So I oppose about the tax free policy of gambling.
>>> So I oppose the tax-free policy of gambling.
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