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Which Korean movie or drama would you recommend to a foreigner to watch? Why?

작성자: 이*윤
2025-03-26 1147

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Considering the artistry and intention, I would like to recommend the very famous Squid Game.
Squid Game can be seen as a mystery thriller dark drama, and first of all, it shows traditional Korean play, so the great advantage is that you can feel Korean tradition and culture indirectly. However, it may be a little difficult to watch because it is cruel for people to die through traditional game. It also shows social problems, showing materialism in competing through huge amounts of prize money, and showing social problems through stories of people who participated in the game. And it also shows how people change their minds and betray through games, showing various aspects of people.
Personally, I'd like to recommend a drama lovely runner.
The chemistry between the male and female characters is the best and they are also good acting.
Situations that happen in the timeslip, and it will be fun to find the hidden stories or situation in it.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi! 

Thank you for sharing your answer with me. I still haven't watched the second season of Squid Game but I will soon see it. 
I have also seen Lovely Runner and that was just absolutely awesome. 
I think you picked really good recommendations. ^^ 

~ Teacher Gina


Considering the artistry and intention, I would like to recommend the very famous Squid Game.
>> CORRECT.

Squid Game can be seen as a mystery thriller dark drama, and first of all, it shows traditional Korean play, so the great advantage is that you can feel Korean tradition and culture indirectly. 
>> Squid Game can be seen as a mystery thriller and dark drama. First of all, it features traditional Korean games, providing viewers with an opportunity to experience Korean tradition and culture indirectly.

However, it may be a little difficult to watch because it is cruel for people to die through traditional game. 
>> However, it may be a little difficult to watch due to its cruelty, as people die through traditional games.

It also shows social problems, showing materialism in competing through huge amounts of prize money, and showing social problems through stories of people who participated in the game. 
>> It also highlights social issues, depicting materialism through the intense competition for large sums of prize money, and illustrating these issues through the personal stories of the participants.

And it also shows how people change their minds and betray through games, showing various aspects of people.
>> Additionally, it portrays how people change their minds and betray others during the games, revealing various aspects of human nature.

Personally, I'd like to recommend a drama lovely runner.
>> Personally, I would like to recommend the drama Lovely Runner.

The chemistry between the male and female characters is the best and they are also good acting.
>> The chemistry between the male and female leads is excellent, and their acting is also impressive.

Situations that happen in the timeslip, and it will be fun to find the hidden stories or situation in it.
>> The time-slip scenarios make it exciting to uncover the hidden stories and situations within the show.
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