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I definitely uploaded my homework yesterday night but there¡¯s something wrong to upload it . I made a mistake of not double checking.. I¡¯m so sorry. When I heard a word ¡®ambition¡¯. Actually, I think that it is a little bit overwhelming.I often see too much ambitious people in TV program. They are always powerful and energetic. It makes me tired and overwhelmed. But everyone, including me has their own ambition and I think we need to have mild ambition. We reveal our ambition in the different point. It can make us improve and change.

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Hello Yumin,

We need to smile and laugh all the time because it can really make us feel good.

In addition, having a good heart will make us happy that is why we can laugh.

I know that you do have a beautiful heart, that why you are beautiful inside and out.

Have the courage to study English because I know that you can speak the language well.

T.Jeny


I definitely uploaded my homework yesterday night but there¡¯s something wrong to upload it . 
>>I definitely uploaded my homework yesterday night but something went wrong when I uploaded it . 
I made a mistake of not double checking..
>>I made the mistake of not double-checking it.
I¡¯m so sorry. 
>>correct
When I heard a word ¡®ambition¡¯. 
>>When I hear the word ¡®ambition¡¯. 
Actually, I think that it is a little bit overwhelming.
>>correct
I often see too much ambitious people in TV program.
>>I often see too many ambitious people in TV programs.
 They are always powerful and energetic. 
>>correct
It makes me tired and overwhelmed. 
>>correct
But everyone, including me, has their own ambition and I think we need to have mild ambition. 
>>correct
We reveal our ambition in the different point. 
>>We reveal our ambitions at different points. 
It can make us improve and change.
>>correct
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