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To reduce the effects of overtourism, tourists have to make efforts in several ways. First, if possible, try to avoid peak time or season. Second, don't litter on the road and try not to make a noise. Third, find less crowded places or hidden zems. Fourth, be nice and polite to locals. Lastly, follow the policy for addressing overtourism such as tourist quota or tourist taxes.

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Hi, Gi Yean!
I completely agree! If tourists can be mindful of the places they visit, then maybe the government doesn't need to worry about overtourism. Also, finding hidden gems, like what you've mentioned, is a good way to distribute the number of tourists, making it more suitable and comfortable for everyone.
- T. Caitlyn 
To reduce the effects of overtourism, tourists have to make efforts in several ways. 
>> CORRECT
First, if possible, try to avoid peak time or season. 
>> First, if possible, try to avoid peak times or seasons.
Second, don't litter on the road and try not to make a noise. 
>> Second, don't litter on the road and try not to make noise.
Third, find less crowded places or hidden zems. 
>> Third, find less crowded places or hidden gems.
Fourth, be nice and polite to locals. 
>> CORRECT
Lastly, follow the policy for addressing overtourism such as tourist quota or tourist taxes.
>> Lastly, follow policies for addressing overtourism, such as tourist quotas or tourist taxes.
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