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I think happiness a choice.

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Yes, I think happiness a choice.
Imagine situation that I miss the bus.
Some people may think that this situation is unlucky, but if the people think that this situation is lucky, because they can eat lunch for the rest of the time, they will be happy.
Therefore, Even in the same situation, happiness can be chosen by what you think.

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Hi Kara! 

Thank you for submitting your homework. 
I totally agree with your answer.
Happiness depends on the person. 

Andrea 

Yes, I think happiness a choice.
>> Correct
 
Imagine situation that I miss the bus.
>> Imagine a situation when I missed the bus. 

Some people may think that this situation is unlucky, but if the people think that this situation is lucky, because they can eat lunch for the rest of the time, they will be happy.
>> Some people think this situation is unlucky while, other's think that it's not; they can have a longer time to eat then that can make them happy. 

Therefore, Even in the same situation, happiness can be chosen by what you think.
>> Therefore, in the same situation, happiness can be chosen. 

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