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Why is it(not) advisable to follow a strict schedule ?

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2025-03-31 268

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I absolutely agree that it is advisable to follow a strict schedule.
I think people tend to live more regularly as they get older.
I think people get lazy when they don't follow a strict schedule because it is human nature to want to relax comfortably.
In my case, I live my daily life according to a planned schedule.
To be honest, I am a lazy man and if I say by what I learned in the textbook this morning, I am a real couch potato.
But I never want to be a couch potato.
That's why I make a strict schedule every day and follow it.
For example, I take an English class every morning at 6 am and I always wake up an hour before the class to prepare for the class. Because I want to study English before I start work at 9 am.
If I don't learn English at 6am, I don't have to wake up at 5am every morning.
It is very hard to follow a strict schedule, but I think it will be very rewarding in the end. And I also believe that my English, although not fluent now, will gradually improve.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Soon Ho^^
Thank you for sharing.
It's good that you're using the expressions you learn from the lesson.
_T. SHAY^^
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I absolutely agree that it is advisable to follow a strict schedule.
>>Correct
OR: It is a good idea to stick to a strict schedule.

I think people tend to live more regularly as they get older.
>>Correct
OR: I think people's lifestyles  become more regular as they age.

I think people get lazy when they don't follow a strict schedule because it is human nature to want to relax comfortably.
>>Correct
OR: I think people tend to get lazy without a strict schedule--it's just human nature to want to relax.

In my case, I live my daily life according to a planned schedule.
>>Correct
OR: Personally, I live each day according to a planned schedule.

To be honest, I am a lazy man and if I say by what I learned in the textbook this morning, I am a real couch potato.
>>To be honest, I am a lazy man and based on what I learned in the textbook this morning, I am a real couch potato.
But I never want to be a couch potato.
>>Correct
OR: However, I try not to be a couch potato.

That's why I make a strict schedule every day and follow it.
>>Correct
OR: That's why I maintain a strict daily schedule and ensure I follow it consistently.

For example, I take an English class every morning at 6 am and I always wake up an hour before the class to prepare for the class.
>>Correct
OR: For example, I take an English class at 6 am every day, and I always wake up an hour earlier to prepare for the class.

Because I want to study English before I start work at 9 am.
>>It's because I want to study English before I start work at 9 am.
If I don't learn English at 6am, I don't have to wake up at 5am every morning.
>>Correct
OR: Without the English class at 6 am, I won't wake up at 5 am every morning.

It is very hard to follow a strict schedule, but I think it will be very rewarding in the end. 
>>Correct
OR: Following a strict schedule can be difficult but rewarding.
And I also believe that my English, although not fluent now, will gradually improve.
>>Correct
OR: And I also believe that my English skills will start showing improvement soon.


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