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As I remember, the best advice that I received is to have tenacity if I want to succeed. I got this advice from my high school Korean teacher, when I was suffering from bad scores.
I entered boarding high school luckily but I thought it was all through my work and was arrogant. However, as soon as I started studying and got test scores I realized the truth. My grades were crawling the bottom so starting that day I started studying. Unfortunately, my grades didn't get that better. Instead of working even more harder I justified the situation by thinking that all the other students are genius. I thought I just don't fit in this place.
When I was stuck in my own thought and was going downhill, my Korean teacher told me that tenacity is the central key to success. Since that teacher was who I followed and respected a lot it was first time in my high school I became humble and revised my mindset. I still think about that scene when something seems unreachable with my capacity.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Ms. WooIn! It must have been tough feeling like you were at the bottom of the class, but the fact that you were able to acknowledge that and change your mindset is a huge strength. 
-T. Sonny
As I remember, the best advice that I received is to have tenacity if I want to succeed. 
>>As I remember, the best advice I received was to have tenacity if I wanted to succeed.
I got this advice from my high school Korean teacher, when I was suffering from bad scores.
>>I got this advice from my high school Korean teacher when I was struggling with bad scores.
I entered boarding high school luckily but I thought it was all through my work and was arrogant. 
>>I entered a boarding high school, which I was lucky to do, but I thought it was all due to my hard work and became arrogant.
However, as soon as I started studying and got test scores I realized the truth. 
>>However, as soon as I started studying and received my test scores, I realized the truth.
My grades were crawling the bottom so starting that day I started studying. 
>>My grades were at the bottom, so from that day on, I started studying.
Unfortunately, my grades didn't get that better. 
>>Unfortunately, my grades didn’t improve much.
Instead of working even more harder I justified the situation by thinking that all the other students are genius. 
>>Instead of working even harder, I justified the situation by thinking that all the other students were geniuses.
I thought I just don't fit in this place.
>>I thought I just didn’t fit in at this place.
When I was stuck in my own thought and was going downhill, my Korean teacher told me that tenacity is the central key to success. 
>>When I was stuck in my own thoughts and things were going downhill, my Korean teacher told me that tenacity is the key to success.
Since that teacher was who I followed and respected a lot it was first time in my high school I became humble and revised my mindset. 
>>Since that teacher was someone I respected and looked up to, it was the first time in high school that I became humble and revised my mindset.
I still think about that scene when something seems unreachable with my capacity.
>>I still think about that moment whenever something seems unreachable for my abilities.

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