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I wrote book review about \'How the World Rand Our of Everything\'

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The book said the world's supply chain is not globalization, become localization which say 'reshoring' or 'nearshoring' It explain to change the history that China is center of manufacture industry. The World was not enough various necessities like medicine, semiconductor embedded car when was Pandemic. The book said the system was what was the problem and how was the problem made. And the book explain to change the trade policy in the U.S., China and countries in the world.

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Good morning, Ella!

It is wonderful to see you here on the Composition Page!

Thank you for sharing the overall content of the book that you have read. You have so many insights in terms of the global supply chain. Truly, we can produce our own raw materials if they are available in our environment. We need to develop our own resources just like during the pandemic. 

Below, I underlined the word/s that you need to study more. Make sure that you understand the grammar patterns so that you can make your sentences better in speaking and in writing. Great job!

See you in class.

-T. Donna~

The book said the world's supply chain is not globalization, become localization which say 'reshoring' or 'nearshoring' It explain to change the history that China is center of manufacture industry. The World was not enough various necessities like medicine, semiconductor embedded car when was Pandemic. The book said the system was what was the problem and how was the problem made. And the book explain to change the trade policy in the U.S., China and countries in the world.
>> The book said the world's supply chain is not globalized, it became localized which is 'reshoring' or 'nearshoring'. It explains change in history that China is the center of manufacturing industries. The world has not enough various necessities like medicine and semiconductors embedded in cars when it was the pandemic. The book said the system was the problem and how was the problem made. And the book also explained the changes of trade policy in the U.S., China, and countries in the world.
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